FATHER'S MYSTERY JOB:
Father's office(12)
"OUT OF BOUNDS"(12)
lonely(5)
empty and cold(13)
" NOBODY ELSE'S BUSINESS"(10)
"If he goes we go"
he'll miss us all(5)
his new job is a mystery
nobody knows(5)
It needs special people to do this job(5)
new job(5)
it's very important(5)
one of his fathers solders where saw(18)
father is very serious(19)
don't understand what it is(9)
He didn't know himself (8)
"WHAT IS IT"(5)
"OUT OF BOUNDS"(12)
lonely(5)
empty and cold(13)
" NOBODY ELSE'S BUSINESS"(10)
"If he goes we go"
he'll miss us all(5)
his new job is a mystery
nobody knows(5)
It needs special people to do this job(5)
new job(5)
it's very important(5)
one of his fathers solders where saw(18)
father is very serious(19)
don't understand what it is(9)
He didn't know himself (8)
"WHAT IS IT"(5)
I really like your poem =) It is awesome!
ReplyDeletetheres alot of like..family connection in there ya know? Its pretty deep!
ReplyDeleteyour poem was great i really liked it.. keep it up.. good work
ReplyDeleteI love this theme, Georgie! It's very relevant to your book.... considering it is told from a child's perspective. Well done!
ReplyDeletethank you thank you it is pretty good huh?
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